Tuesday, March 17, 2009

COMMENT ME :D

So, i decided to write some peotry...
This wasn't to anyone, but i like this style of writing.
It makes me think clearly.
please let me know what you think:)


I hide so much inside
So deep I can't understand.
Come tear me open
Show me what I am.

I can see it so clearly
Bright as day.
reaching out with fingertips
so close.

They brush the answer
but I know.
I can't reach.
I'm waiting for you.

Come take me in your arms
against your chest.
Whisper.
In my ear
I love You.

2 comments:

GraceEstelle said...

i still like it. :)

mona.in.the.box said...

I read this, in my head, and it was entirely in this wispy, wanting voice.
It was pretty cool.
Your poetry has mood. C: